Can def hear Joey going in on this track. My main criticism is the drums, I didn't like the ones use, and along with the hi-hats they sounded too "mechanical"...they would sound more natural and better with some swing and if you change the pattern slightly every 8 bars. Same for the hats, play with the velocity a little more to give the track more energy.
I agree with the above comment. Swap out the hihats for some that are more natural sounding. The chords are dope though, I like them, very spacey. Overall good work minor things like mixing could be done to improve the beat.
I can hear what you mean regarding the hat. I should have waited a day but I was too excited and uploaded it. Thanks for your time! The link to 'Storytelling beat' doesn't work.