My first two songs!

[ivene]

Hey guys I've started working on music a bit and would love to hear your advice on my first two songs:

Ivene - Cake by Ivene | Free Listening on SoundCloud

Ivene - With You by Ivene | Free Listening on SoundCloud

 

[Kozzycer1]

Hi Ivene, Cake -the beat is well produced but I found the lyrics to be a little unimaginative and cliche. Get rid of the auto-tune, too much of that everywhere.