My best beat so far! PLEASE LISTEN [f4f]

[T___Time]

Hey guys. I think i never worked so long on a beat. I think it's finished and want somebody to rap on it.
But maybe you thinks some small things should be changed? Drums? Arrangement? Octaves of melodies etc?
Please give me your feedback! I want to take this beat to 100%

 

[RadiumOfficial]

nice work on the melodies, this beat has a dope vibe! the drums might need a bit more mixing but overall great work on this beat!
check out my latest beat when you get a chance:
In Time by Radium | Free Listening on SoundCloud

 

[HailCaesar]

I agree with the user above nice melodies and chords but the drums needs some work on the kick lacks power and the other drums hit harder than the kick especially the snare other than that the beat is nice.

Check out my latest.
[F4F] Cardi B x Offset x A$AP Rocky Type Beat "Shut Up" [F4F] (Honest Opinions)

 

[Luwidakid]

sounds like some story telling shit, sounds almost like live instrumentation mix with hiphop, i like it.

peep this jawn:
fast&slow by Luwi | Free Listening on SoundCloud

 

[michaelbright]

Really like the melody. I don't know if its my speakers but the snare you have at the end of each loop seems to be somewhat loud. Loved everything else about it.