Listening to your track now buddy, for a first chop this isn't bad at all. As far as advice, I think both the closed and open hats have a bit too much high end...I'd definitely EQ/clip some of that high end out there. The bass could also be a bit deeper imo...but compared to me when I first started this is awesome. Keep at it homie, and always remember...it's the small things that build over time that really flesh out a beat and makes them more clean and crisp.