MF Vandal- Grey Skys ft Crimzon Ink

Your lyrics are too obvious and your flow stays the same throughout the first verse. Not a fan of the hook, at all. I don't know - this just sounds too generic as it is and the delivery is a bit all over the place in this. Don't know, not feeling this honestly.; The beat is great, though.

Feedback on this please Still [F4F]
 
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This has a killer vibe man. I just think with some more creative mixing and arranging this could've been a lot more.
 
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