Nice video bro, camera work and editing is almost as professional as the dudes with 100k+ viewers.
the overall beat was dope! gives me those early 2000's jay z type beats
my only suggestion: if you're looking for a wide audience i would say you'd have to adapt to the current soundscape of 2018 hip hop [but if its for fun / niche crowd then this is perfect]
It is nice. Is just as a producer, I been heard same typ of beats many times similar sound I heard before. Mix wise is no problem what so ever. Is just me that type of "melody" is be proven as "safe". Like Richiey said: "Early 2000's".