Made a new chilled hip hop/lo-fi beat [Returning feedback]
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HailCaesar
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I like the vibe of the beat but one thing I noticed is some of the drums and keys sound kinda off beat I don't know if that was done on purpose but it sounds a lil weird, also the mix is muddy it needs some cleaning up and the drums could use a lil boost the drums should be more in your face than the other sounds.
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Prince Danny the One
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Liked the melody, you got a good ear for samples.
But like homie above me said the drums need to be fixed as they're way off beat. Are you trying to create swing to humanize them?
The kick fits but I think you try a different snare. Bass sounds has a very strange low-fi quality to it but not in a good way. And the levels/mix are a bit off...the hi-hat is so low its nearly inaudible.
I think that this track has potential though, keep at it.
Here's a link to my latest track, peace.
But like homie above me said the drums need to be fixed as they're way off beat. Are you trying to create swing to humanize them?
The kick fits but I think you try a different snare. Bass sounds has a very strange low-fi quality to it but not in a good way. And the levels/mix are a bit off...the hi-hat is so low its nearly inaudible.
I think that this track has potential though, keep at it.
Here's a link to my latest track, peace.
@HailCaesar : Yeah i added swing to the drums so it was kinda on purpose the off beat but i obviously fucked up, didn't notice it was THAT off beat lmao. I thought about sidechaining but in the daw it sounded good, i think i just got ear fatigue without knowing, i'm making beats entirely with closed back headphones :s so that's maybe why... Thank you for the criticism and you time! it definitely helps a lot!
@Prince Danny the One : Yeah im adding swing to them, not a good idea ? And i crushed the bass a bit, not a whole lot but i guess that wasn't a good idea lol. I still have work to do on my mixing skills that i do know.
Thank you for your time and your feedback, i appreciate it!
@Prince Danny the One : Yeah im adding swing to them, not a good idea ? And i crushed the bass a bit, not a whole lot but i guess that wasn't a good idea lol. I still have work to do on my mixing skills that i do know.
Thank you for your time and your feedback, i appreciate it!
Good ideas. Like he said tighten it up timing wise and maybe dial back the vintage sound you have going and I think you have a solid beat in there. Keep at it man!
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