Looking for some criticism F4F

[Myrical Lyfe]

Still don't get how to embed soundcloud, so sorry about that in advance.


https://soundcloud.com/myrical_lyfe/brighter-days-unmixed

Made this is an about an hour today, did not mix or anything. Looking for critique as I'm always looking to grow.


LEAVE LINKS!!!!

 

[DAHTrump]

Pretty nice track. I left a comment on soundcloud! Can you leave me a comment on soundcloud too?

I think better drum selection could've been used.. it sounds slightly weak, but overall I like the composition and it will be cool to see what you do with it

https://www.futureproducers.com/for...op-feedback-feedback-guaranteed-100-a-498201/

 

[blackroyalty]

Still don't get how to embed soundcloud, so sorry about that in advance.


https://soundcloud.com/myrical_lyfe/brighter-days-unmixed

Made this is an about an hour today, did not mix or anything. Looking for critique as I'm always looking to grow.


LEAVE LINKS!!!!

The sample's interesting. This track definitely has potential. In my opinion, I'd work on the sample chops and the drums to a more boom bap type of beat.
Keep working, you're getting there!

Give YOUR Feedback, please? https://www.futureproducers.com/for...-marijuana-michael-joel-freestyle-f4f-498280/

 

[MusicManiac]

I liked the way you played with the sample , very nice drums sounds . Maybe an open hi hat when the drums kicks in?
Keep it up !

 

[Yungspazz]

dope sample, not sure if its a sample or not so ima just say sample lol. don't take offense. i like the beat, i think once you mix it, your gunna have an awesome arrangement! Dope work!

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[Fliphatnadidas]

I like where your going with the track, I think the drums don't hit enough, I would eq them and raise the volume and add more variety with the drums. Good work, keep grinding'

 

[skitzothebeast]

Great sample of strings I must, you definitely need to get this track mixed so the drums could hit harder and bring out the beauty you've created in this track.

F4F - https://www.futureproducers.com/for...-dirty-south-etc/feedback-compilation-498277/

 

[Xremagx]

Good track could use a bassline and crisper drums
f4f- https://www.futureproducers.com/for...h-etc/should-have-been-doing-homework-498343/

 

[skinnyknicca646]

I personally like the track, I love the strings and how they are chopped and contrary to what else everyone else is saying about the drums I like them, I think they need to hit a little harder though, but other than that this is pretty dope

check out this https://www.futureproducers.com/for...-trap-dirty-south-etc/f4f-apollo-18-a-498161/

 

[FLProducer2014]

Returning feed. Nice track, I like the sample! I think the kick definitely needs to hit harder. Once you EQ it and raise the volume it should be much better. I really the sample cool track!

 

[hcgaron]

Beautiful strings to open the track! That had me pulled in right away. I think the chops are pretty dope overall, and I like how you got those crash cymbals in there and the drum rolls were cool.

I agree with what some others have said that the drums could stand to hit harder. Some layering of samples, and probably some compression (if there's loops being triggered) would help them smack. Maybe some saturation (or a compressor that adds some saturation) could give them more attitude as well.

I like where this is going - I look forward to hearing more!

Keep it up!

Please take a listen to my latest track when you have a chance: https://www.futureproducers.com/for...outh-etc/pop-beneath-lights-f4f-100-a-498220/

Cheers!

 

[vato22]

I think once you get this thing mixed I will knock..especially aroung the 1:20 mark when it really kicks up...I dig it..check out my new single off my upcoming LP

https://www.futureproducers.com/for...host-prod-western-genius-498388/#post49897052

 

[namesi]

Very interesting drum pattern on this. It has a cool sound to it. I actually really like the drum selection. That snare is nice. Maybe make the kick thump a little more. I like when the beat kicks in at the 1:20 mark. Good work brother!

This is what my insomnia sounds like..

 

[Myrical Lyfe]

Thanks for all the love guys. It is a sample!

Im going to mix this down and see where it goes. Also, I will return all feed when i get home on my computer tonight.

 

[Bemayy]

I replied u on soundcloud, I like the vibe to it, it's got that sampling feel, that any decent rapper could own in a second.
if you like my music
https://soundcloud.com/rudbinho/changed-my-life-rudbinho-ft-lusid-prod-by-rudbinho
then hmu we can collab on it

 

[Myrical Lyfe]

I replied u on soundcloud, I like the vibe to it, it's got that sampling feel, that any decent rapper could own in a second.
if you like my music
https://soundcloud.com/rudbinho/changed-my-life-rudbinho-ft-lusid-prod-by-rudbinho
then hmu we can collab on it

Whenever you want to collab, hit me up with a PM