Lo-fi is starting to grow on me so thank you for posting a great track. I think you got everything down right for the most part. My preference is a hard kick side chained to the bass so that they, in conjunction with the snare, leads the beat. However, this is a lo-fi beat so your sound selection is on point from the melody all the way down to the drums. I wasn't feeling the string synth at around 1:08 imo. The lead up to the to the higher-end string synths was great but afterwards, it sounded bland as if they were stock plugins. Anyways, I dropped a comment on your channel. Keeping working man. Definitely a fan.
Thanks for the feedback btw