I think its a good start for a beat like the structure is nice but for me personally I think the sounds used are kinda boring and the drum pattern could use some spicing up with some extra percs or switch ups. As I said its a good start just needs a lil tweaking try playing around with some effects and different sounds also listen to some of your fav producers beats listen to how their drums sound might give you some ideas, keep grinding tho.
Yo man I think the track had some tight ideas but a little more diversification and some mixing would do you good. It sounded like there was a nice counter melody but it was very quiet. Sound design is an interesting topic to delve into.