Your snare volume is too low. Turn that baby up! Your main melody pluck sound...i'm just not feeling it. Change the melody. You can even layer it with other sounds to make it sound more full and original sounding. I think once you fix that and improving your mixing, it will sound better overall. Keep at it man!
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