Life is a bitchh (prod Kedra P) feedforfeed

This is a cool track... I like the ominous vibe and certain percussion elements like the reverse cymbals. I kind of wish it had more of a bass presence, but I'm only listening on headphones so it's kinda hard to hear the sub-range. I like the vocal chops, but i think the "lifes a ***** and then you die" during the chorus is a little off tempo. Overall nice work, but I would try and fix that vocal sample in the chorus and get it to flow better.

My new beat:
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...tc/new-horrorcore-beat-808-terror-f4f-514015/
 
Zauważyłem że jesteś z Polski :) Lubie takie bity. Jedynie co bym zrobił to bym podkreślił bardziej perkusję, oraz zmienił linię basował na bardziej drapieżną. Sam bit w sobie jest fajny, ale jeszcze by potrzebował paru szlifów pozdro :)
 
more interesting sounds.. work on painting that picture with the beat .. this felt a little all over the place feel me.. you prolly gotta take some things out. cuz today's music is simple.. but anyway, checkout my new song I put up https://www.futureproducers.com/forums/production-techniques/showcase-your-music-give-and-receive-feedback-/rap-chill-rap-boom-bap-trap-dirty-south-etc/slurrty-top-down-produced-slurrty-feed-4-feed-drop-links-513873/?highlight=
 
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