Let Your Light Shine - DJ Straxger & Star L. F4F

[DJ Straxger]

I'm returning ALL feedback even if I can't get to it quickly because of my work schedule ALL feedback will be returned and is greatly appreciated. Thanks for your time and I hope you enjoy the song.

https://soundcloud.com/dj-straxger-star-l/let-your-light-shine

 

[JayProd]

This is crazy! It's real soulful, I really enjoyed the instrumentation. The sounds are so lively and feel as if a live band played them. I also enjoyed the lyrics a lot, introspective and conceptual, the only thing I'd say is work on your delivery. Try giving off a little more energy, especially to a beat like this. But other than that, your lyrics were great. Keep up the good work!

Check me out: ​https://www.futureproducers.com/for...prod-endine-nujabes-tribute-feed4feed-501170/

 

[SwagProductionz]

nice 90's feel and drums are dope too... i could see cubut anyway[FONT=arial, sans-serif], checkout my new beatmaking video + trap beat https://www.futureproducers.com/for...nother-beatmaking-video-new-trap-beat-501104/ [/FONT]...i've produced for soulja boy/ honey cocaine/ lil b among others and be sure to follow me on twitter https://www.twitter.com/slurRtyrrensy on this keep it up..

 

[DJ Straxger]

Thanks for the feedback you two and sorry for the late return feedback. I should of also let you guys know that that's not me rapping, I produced the beat.

 

[Bertholet]

nice vibe in the beat. the rap fits nicely!

 

[Perrin Bacon]

Rad beat, the drums sound as if you sat by a real kit and played to the beat!
This is a real funky beat. if you could do something to switch up the piano it could add some more flavor to the beat

feedback would be great: New beat after a long time gone 100% F4F

 

[kdanger]

Hey brother this is dope. my only crit would be the delivery feels like it needs more power. if that were on point this would be hella fire dude keep it up this is cool as hell!

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https://www.futureproducers.com/for...rap-dirty-south-etc/lets-keep-rolling-501504/

 

[DJ Straxger]

All feedback has been returned thanks for taking the time out to listen. I was actually messing with the piano hit when I was making the beat couldn't come up with anything else that I liked but I did think the same thing as well because it struck me when I first heard it and I had to attempt to mess around with it.

 

[itsPnuthoe]

Damn I'd bump this. Loving instruments. Has a good feel to it and has some emotion. Well mixxed. thanks for the feedback btw

 

[d1gd33p]

dope instrumentation ... nice groove ... the kick could be more rounder sounds boxy imo ... good work though keep it up

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[EnviZion]

Damn. This is soulful as hell. Those horns are sick. I like how they're intermittently chopped into the verses at low levels but absolutely take over the hook space. That's a nice touch. Good subtlety. I dig this man. Great work!

https://www.futureproducers.com/for...t-emerge-brass-synth-f4f-501657/#post49912723

 

[BigEarsMixes]

This is dope. I agree with the comments on the quality of the instrumental and the delivery of the rap. Could use a little more positive energy and confidence if you know what I mean. I also feel that the vocal could use a little brush up mixing wise.

Check out my latest work and let me know what you think
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...c/mix-before-after-rap-f4f-501426/?highlight=

 

[RahBeats]

Listen in and I like a lot the bass line was dope great content and the vocals were very soothing I could see this as a great interlude to a great album. Keep it up homies got a like from me!
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[DJ Straxger]

Thanks everyone for the feedback it's much appreciated and I'm glad you all are liking the song. All feedback has been returned so far if I for some reason skipped over you please let me know.

 

[Fogsprod]

Hi,

Love this kind of beat. Tiight drums ! Good sample, love the melody !

Peace

 

[Bennbeats]

Thank you for your feedback!
AWESOME beat man! Track sounds solid.. You made the beat? Gave you guys a follow.

 

[BigK]

I gotta say this track is amazing how did you mix in the vocals so well?
Check out my newest track if you like peace! https://soundcloud.com/bigkbeatsallday/runnin-big-k

 

[starin]

I feel oldschool. I Like this vocal in background and trumpet in hook.

 

[DJ Straxger]

Thanks everyone, yes I made the beat but I didn't mix the vocals I went to an engineer. I'm just barely getting into that side of things.

 

[tomkillsjerry]

sampling was tight nice sounds