Thanks for listening to the song. I’m not actually new to recording vocals at all - but I wasn’t involved with the mixing part, that was my engineer. What type of vocals do you like? What else didn’t you like about the vocals apart from the effects?I will be honest, I don't like this kind of vocal but that's just my taste in music so I will do the best I can.
Guitar is pretty good. The beat is fine but that snare sound is used by almost everyone. You should come up with a better snare sound in this. The vocal has too much effects and doesn't sound so professional. It seems you're new at vocal recording but that's okay, if you can fix this that would be awesome.