Jay Prod - Avian (Need honest feedback on this) | F4F

[JayProd]

What up fam! This beat is intended to have a rapper on it, but I wanted some feedback to help make this track overall much better. Much love. Drop your links so I can return the favor

 

[skitzothebeast]

Pan the instruments to give the drums more space to breathe. Probably you can try LRC mixing. The instruments and sound selection are dope. For the artists vocal to have the room it needs to flow on the track just give the drums space and that's it in my opinion.

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[JayProd]

Pan the instruments to give the drums more space to breathe. Probably you can try LRC mixing. The instruments and sound selection are dope. For the artists vocal to have the room it needs to flow on the track just give the drums space and that's it in my opinion.

F4F - https://www.futureproducers.com/for...-dirty-south-etc/feedback-compilation-498277/

Thanks for the feed my man. Dropped some feed on your track

 

[Hdub]

I think a filter on the drums in the intro would be nice. It's hard to hear the bass at all. I don't know if that was intentional or not. I think at some part some glitchy quick hits with that synth hit you have throughout would be nice to add some variance and add some energy. Overall nicely done though.

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[thewirx210]

This is dope! Like a J Dilla type beat. I dig it. I would add a bass of some sort to set it off and give it a bit more variation. Maybe space out the instruments to give each sound it's own space. But otherwise great job man. Keep it up!

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[hcgaron]

Nice work! I do like all the elements you chose and just the overall vibe is great. Really nice with some of those little transitional elements that break up the beat as well.

I agree with what another person said about the beat benefiting from some more bass. Maybe just every now and again there could be a more prominent/deep bass part. Nothing too thick I guess, probably more mid-rangey with a solid low end but it'll help to give it that ''oomph'' and help to make the variations easier for a rapper to hear as well.

Great work - I love everything you put up here!

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Cheers!

 

[FLProducer2014]

I think it sounds really good. I love the intro and the overall track has a chill vibe yet emotional. I do agree with what the first person about panning the drums. Overall I think it is really good.
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[vato22]

This is decent...it does remind me of some dilla, the drums def need to pop more...try boosting the kick in the 50Hz range..the snare needs to pop more...boost ARound 1-2kHz and I think you'll benefit so much on filling out the mix....overall decent job...check out my new single

https://www.futureproducers.com/for...host-prod-western-genius-498388/#post49897052

 

[DAHTrump]

Felt it could've been mixed better. There's a slight muddiness to it.

Otherwise, it's a beautiful track and I really enjoyed the composition! Thanks for commenting on my track!

 

[anaujiram]

I agree mix could sound lil better but dosnt sound that bad . Have that old school sound wich is good . The composition is dope and those drum are banging . Overall this is some great work . Keep up that good work fam .

 

[cratehead]

The melody is dope, and I like the drums. The ducking works well - only complaint is the kick sounds a tiny bit mdudy and sits VERY low in the mix, but I do understand that may be a stylistic choice to get a more DIlla-esque feel. This is a cool track, I like it and I understand it is meant to have an MC but it could use a bit more variety. Nice work!