J dilla inspired boom bap

[RPK]

Ok heres my newest beat give it a listen:



In my opinion one of my best beats.
Will return feedback.

 

[JayProd]

I like the concept of the beat. The whole atmospheric vibe, the piano made it very chill and relaxing, as well as the ambient sound in the background. While I get you were going for the Dilla swing on the drums, it sounded a bit off at points, and not in an intentional manner. I also felt the drums sounded a little bland and weak. A solid EQ could have definitely made it much better, or at least have it sit well in the mix. Another note is that a nice bass line is missing, a thick bass line could have added more to this. But aside that, this beat has some potential. The vibe is great, and I feel like if this was mixed better, I could listen to this for hours. Like those Homework edits they have on YouTube. Much love.

Check me out when you can: https://www.futureproducers.com/for...ed-my-second-ep-jay-prod-lovely-vibes-502299/

 

[chopz makes beats]

i agree with the post above. i think you went a little too far with those offsets to the point it doesn't sound too pleasing to the ear. i also don't like that key chop that comes in and stutters. some of the drum pattern doesn't make sense to me, and i do listen to a lot of psychedelic and experimental stuff. for this particular beat i would go back, increase the tempo a bit, especially because of the sound of the drums, re-arrange the drum pattern after (or before) you re-chop the sample and add a dope bassline. just my opinion.

check out my thread when u get a minute https://www.futureproducers.com/for...guitars-ambient-noises-hard-drums-f4f-502470/

 

[BL3]

- I like the piano sample -- its smooth
- I agree with the first review -- i see where you were going with the swing of the drums but at some points it def sounded too off
- I would maybe up the sample a little
- I would clear a little bit of the low end with EQ -- it feels too full for my taste
- I would turn up the kick too -- its too low in the mix
- Maybe add tiny reverb to the snare to give it an ambient feel

Please return the favour:

https://www.futureproducers.com/for...roduced-benstar-all-feedback-returned-502172/

Thanks!

 

[inFormal_aJ]

something is missing, the beat feels dull and lifeless and out of tune at some place. The beat is not following the metronome i guess. I don't know exactly what you are trying to achieve here so its hard for me to give a feedback. Although try to make the mix clear.

Hey check mine while you can
https://www.futureproducers.com/for.../informal-aj-my-third-official-song-502446/2/