J. Cole Type Beat - Season Premiere (Produced by Da Archangels) F4F100%

wildinout8

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New J. Cole type hip hop joint produced by myself - let me know the good, the bad and the ugly and I will return all feedback and social follows 100%.

 
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Drums are cool not really feeling the melody sound choice. If you wanna keep those sounds I'd try adding more effects to them reverb, delay etc. sounds too dry atm.

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HailCaesar said:
I like the boom bap drums they sound nice and hit hard not to sure how I feel about the other instrumentation I would probs change the other sounds and replace them with a nice piano and some strings.

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Replace everything with some nice piano and some strings on the boom bap beat? Not a digeridoo and a flute? Not a fiddle and ukulele?
 
bank said:
Drums are cool not really feeling the melody sound choice. If you wanna keep those sounds I'd try adding more effects to them reverb, delay etc. sounds too dry atm.

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I appreciate the feedback and agree that the track could use some effects to glue it together.

Your beat is cool - mix is clean and I dig the reverb and delay on the snare hits. I just would like to hear some variation in the pad melody and something that distinguishes your personality against all of the other trap producers.
 
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Thanks for the feedback. I agree with all the opinions above, drums are really cool and mixed well but main synth and bass sounds are not get a long. It feels like all the instrumentals is playing different chords. I would just kept the main synth and put a monophonic bass on it. OR how about using a sample since it's a boombap beat? It was just my opinion though.
 
The lower frequencies and percussion win this track, they're 10/10. I totally get the boom bap vibe you're going for here and it sounds decent. I think it could be better though. I would reconsider the top melodies; I think with better sounds and better melodies this could be more of a banger. Each melody sounds completely distinct from the others; you want the melodies to fit together, but in this one starts then stops, then a completely different one starts then stops. It's confusing a little bit. Also some kind of soft pad in the background would be great to provide more continuity to the beat. You have a solid foundation here; like I said I love the percussion pattern and the bass/hum, but I would focus on redesigning the melody structures.

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I feel like the second melody is off tune, no offense. I also don't think that you should replace the sounds with some other sounds. The other sounds make it feel raw kinda. The drums are good also. I can see someone rap on this.
 
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Pretty solid beat. I like the vibe and the drum programming. I would only add some pad chords under the melody to tight it up the whole concept. Keep up with the good work!

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wildinout8 said:
I appreciate the feedback!

Replace everything with some nice piano and some strings on the boom bap beat? Not a digeridoo and a flute? Not a fiddle and ukulele?
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i think its conl as is good to hear more boom bap around hear hope 2 hear more like this from u sir
 
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