I need opinions and help before I upload this Rap Song (Feedback4Feedback)

[CatpacK]

Please help me with tips and suggestions on how to improve this song

 

[J.SUL]

I love this. The beat was really dope and also clean. I think the vox mixed very well in the track. I also enjoyed the overall depth. Transitions were smooth and the track built. Keep this going bro!


When you get a chance check out my latest track
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...-dirty-south-etc/new-soulful-flip-f4f-532154/

 

[stgprods]

Did you produce this beat? That phasing melody sounds very nice, but it's a bit too loud to my ear. The mix sounds clean on my headphones. You can try panning ad-libs to left and right. I think it would make it more interesting.

Check out my last work here , like and subscribe if you liked it <3:
Migos Type Beat - "Blue Jeans" [FREE] - YouTube

Sincerely ,
STG

 

[The Funk Junkie]

This is a tight song. The instrumental is mixed pretty well but it seems like the vocals are a little unclear. Maybe a little too heavy on the reverb for my taste. The vocals seem a little boxy sounding in general, not really sure if that's a result of the recording or if it's post recording eq. Overall, it's solid but I do think the vocals could be cleaned up with some eq changes and a scaling back of the verb. Hopefully that helps, just one opinion though...

 

[mustafaonthebeat]

Please help me with tips and suggestions on how to improve this song

That panning synth sounds dope as hell. Really like it. Your bars aren't bad at all, hook is cool, but the vocal is mixed too quietly/sounds distant. You got a dope song here if you remix the vocals to "sit" on the beat

Check out my new track: https://www.futureproducers.com/for...irty-south-etc/f4f-ballin-ayem-banger-531944/

 

[CatpacK]

I love this. The beat was really dope and also clean. I think the vox mixed very well in the track. I also enjoyed the overall depth. Transitions were smooth and the track built. Keep this going bro!


When you get a chance check out my latest track
https://www.futureproducers.com/for...-dirty-south-etc/new-soulful-flip-f4f-532154/

Did you produce this beat? That phasing melody sounds very nice, but it's a bit too loud to my ear. The mix sounds clean on my headphones. You can try panning ad-libs to left and right. I think it would make it more interesting.

Check out my last work here , like and subscribe if you liked it <3:
Migos Type Beat - "Blue Jeans" [FREE] - YouTube

Sincerely ,
STG

That sound is a sample and thanks I took your suggestion and added some panning!

This is a tight song. The instrumental is mixed pretty well but it seems like the vocals are a little unclear. Maybe a little too heavy on the reverb for my taste. The vocals seem a little boxy sounding in general, not really sure if that's a result of the recording or if it's post recording eq. Overall, it's solid but I do think the vocals could be cleaned up with some eq changes and a scaling back of the verb. Hopefully that helps, just one opinion though...

Its a result of bad recording thanks for the tip! I cleaned it up more!

That panning synth sounds dope as hell. Really like it. Your bars aren't bad at all, hook is cool, but the vocal is mixed too quietly/sounds distant. You got a dope song here if you remix the vocals to "sit" on the beat

Check out my new track: https://www.futureproducers.com/for...irty-south-etc/f4f-ballin-ayem-banger-531944/

These are not my bars, I took the accapela from a rapper, thanks for tip about the distant vocals!!! really helped me there!!

Thank you all I returned the favour!!