You have some nice ideas in this beat, but to me it doesn't flow very well between sections. Drums are also very erratic, but they grew on me towards the end.
The intro was really nice but I fully agree with John Wallstreet regarding the rest. Section don't flow as good as they could. You've got nice sounds in there but I don't like the programming.
i know. it's sa problem i can't get past. nice drums, and good melody but somethings always a 'little' off... but at the same time, i don't wan something super simple like
(kick - space- snare - kick - space - snare - kick- or kick-snare-kick-kick-snare)
Simple does not equal bad. the drums are standing out so much I cant focus on anything else. I like variety when it comes to drums but I also need them to have a steady flow. Like John said its good stuff but needs a bit of work.
Keep it up man. trial and error is a great way to do things.