Help me finish this track!!

[quantizeproductions]

Okay, so I've been sitting on this track awhile...

https://soundcloud.com/quantizeproductions/needfeedback/s-ZyYGS

I'm really happy with a lot of this work, but I can't help but feel that it is either missing something, or that it's just arranged really badly so it is giving this impression of "unfinished".

I know that some of you guys on this board really, really excel in this type of music and it is something that I'm quite new to, just wanted to try my hand at it. So I would 100% appreciate some help so that I can get this finished, and mixed down...

Any feedback will be returned, you can drop me a link in here, or you can PM me - whichever makes you happy.

Thanks in advance FP.

 

[Outss]

the loud tag kind of threw me off when it dropped. I think the thing u need to work on is just the intro build up.. also the clap sounds like it needs some sort of distortion or something to give it character.. I like the samples 'ohhh'' .. take off the tags tho man it sounds amateurish .. keep up the grind rtf peace https://www.futureproducers.com/for...th-etc/yourself-outss-ft-chloe-opondo-533590/

 

[L_P]

Yea the tag kinda through me off also An yea def missing something maybe cut out some stuff make some drops I do like the oh sample tho def nice

 

[Donta Black]

Its honestly up to you bro, you made this difficult for yourself construction the drum pattern such as you did, its not common, but I can say this, you need a sub melody, something that compliments the sythn you already have in place. Check me out: https://www.futureproducers.com/for...beat-pressure-pt-2-prod-dontablack330-533800/