yo I love the vibe and overall feel, definitely every single element fits into the mood you went for, and that's real good in case somebody's gonna make a full song out of it with vocals. the mix is clean all the through, but I'd beef up some of the sounds. maybe the kick and main guitar/synth (the one that plays all the way through). also maybe some more reverb on the snare, but that's just personal taste. very well composed track overall though, I love the dark piano chords and strings that come in, really add to the mood and keep it from getting repetitive. good work man, keep it up.