This was dope that was my first interaction with grime I've never heard it. The production flowed, sounded very industrial which i think with the name grime is how it should sound right? Dope keep at it homie!
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I also like what you did with this the intro was coo for me but the transition into the drop I think could've been smoother, how your drums come in, but it dope, keep it up bruh! sorry for the late response, final exams killin me.