It is good but not great. Trash it. You have to work harder and make music that relates to people that matter.
This just does not make an impact. It sounds average and mediocre. You have to do more to make yourself sound more original and more prominent. You blend in with everybody else puttin gout trash records.
Please reevaluate and make some that has a real impact. At least get a decent beat to rap/sing over. I got bored after the first 20 seconds.
Good track i like it. Was this off the top of your head or did you write this?
the production is different. The rapping is alright the flow is good and i like the voice. The overall mix is good and clear. Not too much of a fan of the singing bits, the production is good and makes plenty of room for the voice! Keep it up man.. I would say it isn't trash lol.. Rtf? Peace Freestyle using 20 words from facebook comments! - outss
You produced and sang this? Shit is dope, you deff got talent. Followed u on soundcloud. Peep my mixtape
THE SLOW TAPE VOL. 1 by Slow Life | Free Listening on SoundCloud