The keys on your beat are very nice. The drum pattern is good but I think you can do better. I don't really feel this new melody at 0:35. The mixing sounds good to me, nothing bad to say about this part. Keep up the good work and thank you for the feedback on my beat.
Yeah nice keys, but some of the notes of kinda offkey.
And yeah the drums seems a little bit too "fake", i don't know they are not really into the beat.