This was almost really dope! I enjoyed the idea of this beat. I wanted just a little more variation in the melody. Adding and dropping instruments, and also adding and dropping the drums. You did that, which is awesome, however, I'd like to hear just SOME of the drums drop sometimes. Hats here, drop the kick later, drop the snare later, etc. Overall, this was almost what I think you were shooting for. Keep working on the melodies! Make them longer and add some differentiation in there.