F4f slow sample chill rap song all feedback appericiated

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BLACKTEENWOLF (prod. by Renaissanze) by RenaissanzeBEATs | Renaissanze BEATs | Free Listening on SoundCloud

 

[Chrisgalactic]

I like the beat its chill, the lyrics could use some work especially on a beat like this. I think the lyricism should be a little deeper have a couple of multi syllabus the rhyme scheme is too simple and the mix of the vocals also don't sound that great. Keep it up tho keep grinding!

Can you check out my beat when you get the chance?

https://www.futureproducers.com/for...ap-dirty-south-etc/i-just-love-hip-hop-547634