to be honest, this is not good, i know you are a beginner and you will learn in time, keep it up!
my tips:
the drums are weak, you should EQ and compress them, also sidechain the kick
the sample has a lot of highs, you should add a lowpass filter
also the beat is too long imo, either make it shorter or add more variation
keep working dude and thanks for the feedback on my beat!