honestly was a fan on everything apart from the main melody, it didnt match with the background synth you used imo. drums and percs sound really crispy though and the talking sample you used is sick, good work.
I agree with SPDY the atmospheric sound is cool and the drums are real nice but the main melody doesn't suit the rest of the beat and tbh kinda ruins it imo I say change the melody or the sound used for it it might be the sound everything else sounds dope though.