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    [F4F] METRO BOOMIN TYPE BEAT. Ever Since by Mango

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    Hey fellow producers.

    Made a chilled trap beat.
    All constructive feedback is welcome. Will return feedback also.

    Peace.
    Ever Since by mango | Mango | Free Listening on SoundCloud
    Last edited by mangoman; 2 Weeks Ago at 08:18 PM.

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    Dope beat, the drum sound selection could use a little work, like the snare sounds really thin and tinny, and the synth brass that comes in sounds a little too fake but overall dope track!

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    Well I actually like that track after 1.12. Synth brass was too loud for me. But overall nice one!

    OUTLAW (prod. zonta) by zonta | Free Listening on SoundCloud

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    Quote Originally Posted by 1zonta View Post
    Well I actually like that track after 1.12. Synth brass was too loud for me. But overall nice one!

    OUTLAW (prod. zonta) by zonta | Free Listening on SoundCloud
    Thanks for listening. Yeah a few people said the brass was a bit loud. Gonna remaster/mix it today anyway.

    I think your songs pretty cool. Although I think because its loud its hard to find the different elements in the song. They're not super separate.
    Like the piano but I think the 808 could be more sliding and I think it's a bit too deep, I can hear the very low bass frequencies which is making it a bit fuzzy. Like the choir sound too. Did you make this off FL Studio? I think your mix could be a bit more stereo as well.

    Either way though, good work. With a bit of tweaking this will bang.
    Last edited by mangoman; 2 Weeks Ago at 05:54 AM.

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    The vibe is great. Real laid back but you need work on the mixing and mastering.

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    love the chill vibes, great job on this. i like the little 8 bit samples you used, very unique sounding
    check my latest beat if you get a chance:
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    ive no idea what to make of this. There a is a lot going on, the beat sounds a little bit to messy to be honest. Drums are not really too good imo.

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    The percussion could use some work. I would have made the snare much louder, thrown in some reverb, probably selected a different sample/built a different snare altogether. I would also throw some sort of high end kick to layer the one you have; it seems to only have low frequencies. The mood seems to change with each new synth/lead that comes in. The piano/guitar (can't tell what it is) seems to be from a poor plugin. Try throwing effects on it to make it sound better. The bassline is pretty solid. It's a unique track with a lot of changes throughout it. I personally find that it's a little too much. It's gives off a good vibe though and I wouldn't say it's bad at all. However, I would rethink the arrangement and try to focus on a few of the best melodies and play off of those in addition to the previous suggestions regarding the percussion and EQing. Keep at it, though. Music is individual, and keep trying to develop your own sound.

    I'd appreciate any feedback you could leave here:
    (F4F) Rap, Pop Piano Instrumental | "Never Forgotten"

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    Quote Originally Posted by Killa-G View Post
    The vibe is great. Real laid back but you need work on the mixing and mastering.

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    Thanks, yeah I'm still trying to work out mixing/mastering. Know the basics but mixing+mastering is still a WIP. Sent feedback in your thread btw. Good track.

    Quote Originally Posted by Northeast Sounds View Post
    The percussion could use some work. I would have made the snare much louder, thrown in some reverb, probably selected a different sample/built a different snare altogether. I would also throw some sort of high end kick to layer the one you have; it seems to only have low frequencies. The mood seems to change with each new synth/lead that comes in. The piano/guitar (can't tell what it is) seems to be from a poor plugin. Try throwing effects on it to make it sound better. The bassline is pretty solid. It's a unique track with a lot of changes throughout it. I personally find that it's a little too much. It's gives off a good vibe though and I wouldn't say it's bad at all. However, I would rethink the arrangement and try to focus on a few of the best melodies and play off of those in addition to the previous suggestions regarding the percussion and EQing. Keep at it, though. Music is individual, and keep trying to develop your own sound.

    I'd appreciate any feedback you could leave here:
    (F4F) Rap, Pop Piano Instrumental | "Never Forgotten"
    The guitar I just made it extra bright. I'm usually not a fan of overly bright guitar sounds but I did it to try and make space in the mix. I'm still figuring out how to make the song clean as possible. Sometimes its fairly clean and sometimes its not. Think I probably use too many channels for certain songs which is what causes this.

    Thanks for the advice though, will defo take this in consideration. I've only really been producing properly since like August so I'm starting to find a sound now but I'm seeing progress which is cool. I'll have a listen of your track in a bit.
    Last edited by mangoman; 2 Weeks Ago at 04:45 PM.

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    Ok I like the idea you was going for the sounds used are nice but I can't lie the mix is very messy and muddy some instruments are lacking and some are overpowering and not leaving room for others to breathe. I say work on your mixing coz if this was mixed nicely this would be dope I can tell from the sounds used and how you structured it .

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