The mix isn't so good imo. The drums are way too quiet when they kick in, especially for a dark sounding track like this, and the opening sound was kind of loud/grating to me. It has some pretty good melodic stuff tho and nice progression in it, some cool sections, and pretty good variation. Would be dope with some louder drums imo.
Anyway, here's my track bro, would appreciate any feedback you have for me! Nas One Love [REMIX]
I agree that the intro seemed to set up a really loud trap sound and the drums just weren't quite hitting there. Just lower the melody a bit and up the drums and this track would be 100 times better. All of the elements are there. Should be dope with a slight change.
Definitely agree with the guys above. If you mix it better, it will be 10 times better. Mix around your drums so they bang. Lower the volume on your synths! Keep at it man. Took me along time to get my mixes perfected. Anyways, please gimme feedback here: