[F4F] Made a beat inspired from Dragon Ball Z

[F-Zero]

The melody specifically, is Heroic Trunks's theme from DBZ, I just recreated it. The reason why it's so short is because I wasn't sure if I was going to finish it, I wanted feedback first. Any feedback would be appreciated thanks!

 

[HailCaesar]

From what I heard it sounds calm can't really give much feedback as the beat was very short but one thing I would say is turn down the snares a lil or remove some of the sharpness on the high end I was listening on earphones and it was a bit too sharp for the ears.

Check out my latest.
[F4F] Playboi Carti x Yung Bans x Famous Dex Type Beat (Melodic) [F4F]

 

[F-Zero]

From what I heard it sounds calm can't really give much feedback as the beat was very short but one thing I would say is turn down the snares a lil or remove some of the sharpness on the high end I was listening on earphones and it was a bit too sharp for the ears.

Check out my latest.
[F4F] Playboi Carti x Yung Bans x Famous Dex Type Beat (Melodic) [F4F]

Thanks for the feedback man I'll probably end up turning down the high end in the master.

 

[Luwidakid]

very nice flip, started off slow but that drop is worth the wait, well done!

Peep the first song on the spike playlist and lmk what u think what a comment on there!....
spike | #spikeplaylist by Luwi | Free Listening on SoundCloud

 

[Tw23hree]

Nice lil flow, works well. Id finish the works!

 

[s.singh]

Never watched DBZ so I have no frame of reference. I would agree with the poster above who says turn down the snares - I'm listening on monitors, and feel they could be closer to the level of the claps. I was actually surprised that you didn't use hi-hat triplet rolls in this, it seems as though that's the norm these days! If you decide to make a longer version, consider creating another section for a bit of variation - I think that the bell synth/your melody could get a little repetitive over a longer track. Would like to see what ideas you'd get for a hook section on this too.

Keep it up and please return the feedback on my track:

https://www.futureproducers.com/for...will-return-all-feedback-546047/#post50090198

 

[F-Zero]

Thanks for all of the feedback! Much appreciated.

 

[RadiumOfficial]

really nice work on the melodies and percussion, i think that sample worked well for this beat. if you decide to finish it, my only suggestion is work on the mixing a bit. overall dope beat!
check out my latest beat when you get a chance:
In Time by Radium | Free Listening on SoundCloud

 

[AugustusTheGreat]

I really like the 808 bass in this. Hits hard. I think you should make a full length version for sure. Catchy little melody.

Here is my beat.

[F4F] Augustus the Great - Styx (Returning all feedback)