Hey bro not bad at all. Focus on practicing your mixing skills and make sure your drums are prominent! I just dropped a new track and would appreciate your feedback. If you really fuck with it leave a like or comment!
The beat has some dope sounds and the 808 is wavy but the drums could be boosted they need to stand out more in the mix especially in rap music the drums are one of the main features. The beat could also use a lil more variation gets a lil repetitive.
Good stuff! It does feel like the drums are being drowned tho and feels a bit repetitive. Just switch it up a bit more and let those drums breathe and you got something very nice. Keep hustling!