I think the melody itself can use a bit of reverb and a bit more variation. I do like that the beat cuts off to that section where the dude is singing it keeps things interesting but I think it goes on for too long lol You need harder drums bro for that sample dont be scared to turn those drums up a bit. keep it keep up the hard work!!
I actually like the unusual drums. Different with that tom, but it actually is kind of catchy after a while. I don't really like how that whole section is just basically another song. You need to change it or add something to that part. Seems kinda boring/unexciting just to stick a whole song in there. Might just be me though.