(F4F) I'm 14 Years Old and...

[The DM]

I'm 14 years old and this is my second collaboration with a rapper. I make many types of beats, and I'd love to hear your feedback on this song. TB Respect - Glow (Prod. The DM) by The DM | Free Listening on SoundCloud
Please give me advice, as I am open to criticism and collaborations. (I made the beat and TB Respect rapped it)

 

[HailCaesar]

I like the beat especially the synth melody I would say more variation but with the vocals over the beat you don't really need to as the rapper takes your attention away from the beat and nice mix you left enough room for the artist to breathe on the beat so overall great job also the rappers flow on the beat is dope he can switch it up nicely.

 

[Mr.nRage]

Gude,

I think the vocal is slightly too loud for the instrumental. The beat itself is nice, but could benefit from a bit more low end and a more dominant kick / snare. Other than that - really nice for a 14yo. Keep at it, bro!