your drums are crispy on this, id just add more of a ambient melody behind it all on this as the chords you got are definitely nice but they dont fill the whole beat leaving it silent at points. you got some real nice stuff though man, keep grinding.
The artwork is fire haha. I like the that weird percussion noise you have in there its a nice touch. The only criticism I have is the melodies might be doing too much to follow (for a singer). Think about how many different top lines are going to be going on, the melodies are gonna limit the freedom the artist has. Besides that this is dope! Return the feed when you can: New EP - As I See It by Lowwki - F4F