Kick drum is being drowned out by the main melody, I'm going to be honest I don't like. The consistency of the melody doesn't have any substance or any character its just a chord progression that doesn't really change and I honestly don't think the drum pattern you picked really fits the overall beat. The mix needs work but keep at it man! Don't be scared to experiment and get crazy with your sounds you have a decent foundation I just think you need to push the boundary more.