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    Experimental trap beat [F4F]

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    Hey guys, tried something a little bit different, need some feedback on it,



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    Dope beat Nice melody you got!!The trapwork is good! I hear that bas maybe a bit mor 808 in it? And a vocal effect in it should make a diffrent!! But overall a good beat!!
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    This is EDM Trap...no? I'm not too familiar with that genre but this is technically sound; I hear no flaws. My only problem with is the lack of soul. Perhaps some more organic samples would "humanize" it and give it emotion. That bassline is nasty though...and those lo-fi snares. DOPE! The progression is on point...it feels like you're travelling somewhere. Cool arrangement. Humanize it with found sounds and vocal samples and other natural fx...

    Dope nevertheless.

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    This is great. Sounds like a mix of EDM and Hip Hop Trap Music. Keep experimenting. The melodies are very cinematic, which is almost like Progressive House, like Deadmau5 style.

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    i'm listening while writing, the intro is good but i'm past the intro and the intro hook is still going, i think it needs some variation because it's realy reptitive, give the listener something else to har, even if you just swap out some notes and replace them with different, compatible notes... this type of trap is hard to do, so Congrats on that, and no offense about the repetitive things, i see it has changed about halfway through with the pad, but the first half was a little too basic, i would work on counter melodies by mixing up you notes. The Production is great, it jst needs a liitle more love on the variation... the intro became the verse and chorus, y'see

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    Dope track! I think my favorite part was your melody! Good work & keep it up!
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    Only now found the time to respond, sorry guys ill drop feedback

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    This sounds like EDM Trap but very chill at the same time, the beat sounds dope it sounds like its taking you on a journey when you close your eyes and listen great work.

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