Interesting idea homie. Love the chill vibe I'm getting from the track, however, you need to work on your chord choices. To me, it seems that your wavy saw bass and 808 bass line, the piano like synths that are panned to the left, and your pan synths on the right are all in completely different keys. Very disorienting to listen to when played together. If you want to do a key switch, you need to make a build up, or at least a transition, that will ease it in for the listener. However, that disorienting feeling might be what you are going for, so congrats if that was your plan lol. Very trippy. Add some reverb to the snare and clap. They are waaay too dry, and also thin too. Need to focus your efforts on making those pop, which is what makes trap, well, trap XD. Other than that, great track homie! Love the idea you got going on here.
Weird use of chords and melodies. Sounded dissonant and cool at the same time. Original work and it seems thats what you were going for. kizthe13th had some great points.
i feel like the out of key business could have been done way better, it just sounds unprofessional and as if youve been making beat for a week. i like the drums though, cool patterns and such. this could be a really outstanding track if it was just touched up a bit. best of luck, keep it up
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Sorry to those who left feedback on my track! I have had a lot going on recently, but I left feedback on everyone's tracks. Sorry for the wait, I do not like to do things like that.