I don't listen to alot of Lo-Fi Beats, but when I do I usually get the same nice feeling. Just something chill and comfy. I like that you tried to be more daring and creative than the usual beats on this forum. Can only respect that.
If I was you, I would maybe throw a vox (made from your own vocals) in the start of the tune.
- I like the drums alot in the second part, but I would have used a more smooth vst for that part, instead of the hard synths. Stay creative, and keep going
Love the Kanye West Sample!! The first part was so dope, not really feeling the vocoder on the second part but thats just my personal preference! Really dope stuff though!