Simply but catchy. I think the mix could be a bitter tighter. The verses were a bit too basic. Some of the rhymes were predictable. I really like the hook tho.
Thanks again for the feedback on my beat.
Weird track, not in a bad way. The vocals needs work in the mix, too much muddy frequencies in my opinion. I would lower the volume of the snare just a little bit. When you introduce the hook I feel like there is something missing, perhaps you should add a synth right when the hook starts. Being said, try adding one more sound in the track overall, keep it simple like the way you have it.
I give this track a 7.
If you have time please review my track. Thankyou
I like the beat, i like the fact you own the drum samples. I'm not an expert on vocals so i cant provide feedback for the lyrics. I would probably would knock the lower end of the vocals with a parametric EQ and a slightly boost the mid highs for a cleaner sound. I love the childish esque gambino move you pull at 2:26. I think your strength in this song is how the vocals play with the drums, but in some parts it gets a tad bit muddy mostly in the beginning before it breaks out 0:29. Maybe lower the intro vocals just a tad bit with added reverb to make the intro part airy and full rather than the gaps between the drums. Since i think the clarity of the voice in the last third is the best voice wise since it sounds like your vocal chords are completely open, maybe try to do that with the other parts. I do like the track a lot, keep it up.
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