Hey.. On a positive note I quite liked the drums on this track.. But I felt that the keys sounded too rigid.. Repeated melodies for a full length track can get a lil dry sometimes so it would have been nice to have seen u switch it up a bit on the bridge..
Solid drums, dont like the crash too much. The crash doesn't fit in imo.
Try to put some more diversity in the beat. Its a little bit repetitive like this..
Nicely produced beat. I think a synth lead in the chorus would have been cool. Maybe you could have switched up the melody a little at some point too. The vibe is spot on though. Real solid beat.
i think you got the basics but you just need to work on the arrangement and make it more entertaining maybe you need to add an element to liven up the track or not repeat the melody as much.