dragon boy jig | huff n puff | F4F

[ryuuko]

hello

another long break lol, been taking the time to move from fl to ableton

for this track, feedback on mix and arrangement specifically is much appreciated, i dont think its too amazing, maybe you'll agree or disagree

be honest, and as always f4f, just leave your links and ill be honest too

enjoy
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[BM_XT]

Arrangement is too empty sometimes. Especially when only guitar chords are playing(like on 0:30). YOur sides sound too empty also, everything is in center. I would fatten bass with at least MaxxBass at least.

Here is mine.

https://www.futureproducers.com/for...f-ass-bouncer-101-f-ffff-546386/#post50091498

 

[HailCaesar]

I have to agree with the user above on this one the beat does sound a lil empty and the sides of the mix sound bare you need to occupy the whole frequency range I say adding in more inserting sounds that will use each frequency range but don't make them clash also have each sound panned so that they can be heard clearly but also create a wider mix and fill up the empty spaces in the beat.

 

[Kazebeat]

I think this track shines after about 25 seconds w/ a catchy melody and good drum work, although like others mentioned above there's a lot of potential for you to incorporate ambient effects and noises. You could do much more in terms of effects (panning, delay, reverb, etc.) with the string synths, too. Keep your low end frequencies mono and put some stereo separation on your mids and high ends. Overall a decent beat with a lot of room to play with. Keep it up homie

 

[Hbluntproductions]

Kick is a little loud in the mix. That low guitar sound is clashing a bit with the 808 when they both play at the same time.

Please check this out.
Lo-Fi Boom Bap(feed4feed)

 

[SwagProductionz]

the sounds on this are old / dated.. work on that.. maybe invest in some presets for your vst's

 

[J-Hershey]

I really like the way your drums knock and youve got some interesting melodies here.