dragon boy jig | hometown | feedback returned

[ryuuko]

hello hello hello

brand new track, feedback on flow, delivery, mix, and lyrics are most appreciated

also on the light singing that i do, let me know if it works or needs some work

feedback is always returned boys that just how we do

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[DoubleAbeats]

that hometrack shit fire. good shit. check out my beat tape Protoj [instrumentals] Mixtape by Bvtman

 

[ryuuko]

wow bro that tape is awesome, alot of the beats sound like j dilla meets TPAB kendrick production. you are really gifted, the tracks on there are more than just beats bro. you got a twitter or something? i dont know how to follow you on datpiff haha

 

[HailCaesar]

Nice work on the beat it sounds very clean but I do think the vox mixing needs some work. the beat is louder than the vocals and at certain points its hard to hear the vox and ad-libs so that needs adjusting I didn't pick up some of the lyrics because of that issue so I can't really give feedback on the lyrics, also the delivery isn't that bad the flow could use a lil more work as I said it's not bad but the flow just needs to be more fluent and let it come natural & for the singing parts what I did hear sounded fine to overall I think this could be good but the vox mixing just needs some work.

 

[Sabelo93]

Very nice flow and effects on the vocals. At the 1minute mark when you go with higher pitch you should increase the volume on the vocals a bit because the beat is louder than the vocals.very nice beat, I like the after credit part 2!