Donta Black - The Mood (F4F)

[Donta Black]

What's good FP,

I recorded this song after I acoustically treated my bedroom on a $100 Audio Technica at2020 condenser mic over a pre-mixed instrumental. Though my preference is to wrap over tracked out instrumentals. I wanted to prove it is capable of achieving a decent mix over a two-track.

Before anyone asks, the song was written by me and performed by me. As an aspiring engineer, I will be grateful if you gave me your honest feedback.

Donta Black - The Mood - YouTube

 

[AugustusTheGreat]

Pretty good man. If anything, the vocals might be slightly too loud at points compared to the instrumental. but I'm certainly no expert at that kind of thing. Wish the drums were louder in the beat, but you can't control that. Your actually rapping was really solid. I enjoyed the song overall for sure. Pretty catchy hook. Nice work.

Here is my beat. AUGUSTUS THE GREAT - they don't like my music (Returning all feedback)

 

[Johnnie Cleveland]

yeah nice work man, sounds really nice. maybe the vocals couldbe turned out a few decibels. But i really like what you have done with it. I subbed liked and commented on the video keep rockn!


can you check this out when you have time?
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[nDrew Beats]

Dope flow and lyrics but the beat level should be balanced with the vocal level.The flow is dope as I said..keep it up bro!