Donta Black on 16orBetter Cypher HOSTED BY: JackThriller !

[Donta Black]

Whats good FP fam, its been a while, I was recently in a 16orBetter cypher hosted by Jack Thriller; funny ass dude.

If you guys could give it a look and let me know what you think, be critical with me! Want to see if what yawh say correlates to how im thinking.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5pMYPwmKg2Q

Leave links so I can return the fav!

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[timetravtoaster]

Greetings there!


Nice flow. I like the unconventional word play. At one small time the timing slipped a little, but to back, the content at that point was thought provoking. Nice work keep it going.


Please return the feedback on a new travel from TUVM here: Lotus of The Kundalini (कुण्डलिनी)

- TTT

 

[G-Town Beats]

This is cool format.
You killed it.
That beat was cool too.
But I think you got more potential.
Keep it up bro!

 

[grasskingdoms]

super dope, pretty solid beat and well made video. you have a really good voice too, your rhymes are dope but you do need a little improvement, you seem pretty confident for the most part but you just need a little bit more time to really find your self and find your sound. youre very talented though and you have a bright future if you keep it up. great job

 

[tomkillsjerry]

nice. soild skills go get it my dude

https://www.futureproducers.com/for...rty-south-etc/grimey-hip-hop-beat-f4f-500516/

 

[Donta Black]

Thanks for the feedback guys! Uppin'!

 

[DeeBeatz]

video is nice, beat is cool and your rappin is really solid.

 

[RzRbeats]

That was some tight stuff right there! you've got some great skills and the beat is very great too,no flaws,Keep it up!

Check me out when you like:

https://www.futureproducers.com/for...er-boom-bap-instrumentals-free-dl-f4f-500953/

 

[kdanger]

really solid job all around man. you are a beast for sure haha

check out this!
K Dangerous here!! Another Track from my album!!! really want your opinion f4f!!
give sweet sorrow a listen too im curious to hear what you think!!