Different style beat really need feedback F4F

[emohbe]

Whats up everybody, I just put out a new track and I could use some insight and feedback on it. I feel like its a unique style and also feel like I nailed the guitar part, but I'm wondering what y'all think.

https://soundcloud.com/macks_lennon/play-dough-life

Thanks

 

[JBStar23]

Sounds really good as a whole. Pretty catchy beat could definitely be a banger.

 

[Section Dot 007]

This has a really cool sound. I think the instruments over power the drums a bit, but nothing major. Guitar part was a refreshing touch, well done.

https://www.futureproducers.com/for...c/barack-obama-spitting-freestyle-f4f-502476/

 

[BL3]

- Cool sample
- I like the saw bass you played under the sample -- gives the beat a grimey vibe
- Turn up the kicks and snares a little more
- I like the concept -- very unique
- The mids/low freuqncies seem to be a little cluttered but it is full indeed
- Guitar part was cool addition

Overall good work -- i would work on the mix though!

Please return the favour:

https://www.futureproducers.com/for...roduced-benstar-all-feedback-returned-502172/

Thanks!

 

[emohbe]

So I gather I need to continue mixing. Always the most difficult learning curve for me because every song is different. Thanks! Im not sure if you've heard of a producer called Clams Casino, but some of his stuff can sound muddled and I think thats with intention. Just an idea.