Did I slay this Final Fantasy instrumental or nah? 100% Feedback Returned.

[Donta Black]

Whats crackin' FP fam, Yawh ain't know I spit too right? Check out the song & let me know your honest! Its all love, good or bad, im bout growth over here.



Edit: I did not make this beat. I only rapped on it. .

 

[Zakwan Small]

The beat is great. My only issue is the lead, I think it's too high. If I crank the volume up it starts to hurt my ears or maybe i'm too old.

Other than that bro the beat is great! I have no other complaints or suggestions.

Give Feedback here!

 

[r:aeplay]

Great sampling done here and you can tell your def into the beat with your voice

 

[Donta Black]

Thanks fellaz, I think you two misunderstood, I rapped on the beat, I didnt make it. 1

 

[DeAdeyE]

Dopest track I have heard on here yet. My only constructive criticism is don't get famous off this song and then get sued, lmao! The beat is cool, but the flow makes the track I think.

Mine is kind of different, give me a f4f if you got time.

89's Horror Science Fiction Trap Extravaganza on your squad

 

[ihuntbears]

Love the overall feel of it, some type of Neo jazz groove and I love the way you used the gangsta lead it meshes well. Maybe try to get a more even balance between kick and snare?.

 

[Donta Black]

Thanks for the feedback thus far that pertained to my question!

 

[HailCaesar]

This beat is really good nice FF sample, your flow suits this beat well & the lyrics are dope nice work I'm feeling the track.

 

[Yungspazz]

beat tuff and flow tuff!!!!

 

[jux]

Nice work man you sounded really tight on this, flow range was impressive

 

[LuxrayBeats]

Whats crackin' FP fam, Yawh ain't know I spit too right? Check out the song & let me know your honest! Its all love, good or bad, im bout growth over here.



Edit: I did not make this beat. I only rapped on it. .

I don't like the beat so much but it is only my taste but you flow killed the beat. Without the ra on it I wouldn't till the end. You did great job on this Final Fantasy Instrumenal

 

[Danamabeats]

I'm not a rapper but you have good flow and metric.though im italian and not understand well the words. ps. the beat is very well done.

 

[Johnnie Cleveland]

Love it not much to say!

 

[Donta Black]

Preciate all the feed yawh!

 

[Stoner Bill]

The flow is a little edgy but It sounds like it's an issue with the song choice and not with your delivery.
Your inflections are on point.
The only suggestion I could offer to make it better is your word choices... for example: "everywhere I be, I'll be ok"... replace 'everywhere' with 'anywhere'... it has a much greater impact even though the difference is subtle. Like, I could be be in the pits of hell, but hey, I'll be ok.

So other than subtle word changes... whatever it is, you got it.
Keep it Up!!!

 

[makingofgotham]

The beat has a dope vibe, the lead is a bit harsh on the low end tho. Can't say anything bad about the rappin tho, really dope flow love the agression you put in this track, nice and contrasting with the smoothness of the beat although thats a banger also.

Make sure to visit my thread as well, let me know what you think I'd be highly interested to hear that ! Here's a link :

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[Augusts One]

dope sample flip.
LEAD SOUNDS IS FLAMESS!!!

 

[aciddroppin]

Yo this is dope! I like the bars, the delivery, the beat, the mix, fuckin everything. Great work!

Please check out this remix
KYLE. iSpy feat. Lil Yachty X Hanz & Acid Droppin Remix (F4F)

 

[The Thrillz]

Daaaamn this is hard! Really like how it sounds. Nice groove and solid mix! And your flow is dope af! Keep up with the good job.

 

[HEADCUTTA]

Sick track sir that beat is nice n jazzy and you had some nice lyrics to go with it your flow fitted perfecly good job