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darksoulboy [F4F]
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Did you produce, record, and write that song by yourself man? If so, DAMN nice job. Sound like your delivery kinda leaves a lot to be desired in some of the sections, most notably at 1:52. I think you could keep that same energy but find a way to say the words in a different way. Either way, dope stuff man.
Thanks for the feedback. What didn’t you like the delivery?Did you produce, record, and write that song by yourself man? If so, DAMN nice job. Sound like your delivery kinda leaves a lot to be desired in some of the sections, most notably at 1:52. I think you could keep that same energy but find a way to say the words in a different way. Either way, dope stuff man.
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Some phrases you say are atonal and kinda off beat, which is fine in occasion. After a while it didn't seem to add anything extra to the track it only served to confuse me a bit.