Really nice piano. I think I'd remove the gun **** sound close to the intro, but thats just personal preference. I think this beat would be best served as like a dark story telling beat and that sound kind of takes it into cheesy gangster territory. The hi hats are crazy, but I like them a lot. I like the drum groove as it, it gives it a nice bounce other that piano and hits pretty hard. I think the only thing this needs is the right rapper on it. Nice job man, keep it up.