Sounds f*cking dope,for real,I think you pretty much got the vibe and the skills,but the mix needs to get balanced,and take out some reverb but hey,let me give you an idea (my personal opinion):Take out some reverb,but work it out as a lo-fi mix (minor clipping,muddiness,vinyl crackles,tons of bass,wear,a good plugin is Izotope's Vinyl and plus it's free),and keep trap vibe along with some good black metal/dark ambient ruggedness.As it is,I don't imagine a trap rapper,but instead I could hear some unsetting grunts and screams running along the beat,great work,Keep it up!